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poem for everyone :) wish to inspire everybody.
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Jul 05, 2008 03:40 pm

senbon_zakura127

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Do you sometimes feel like you want to escape from a perturbing and sad life and a build again a new happy life? Or sometimes you are afraid to escape from that particular situation?

solitary note (bow)

In this crack of dawn
Alone in the meadows
So horrified and thrown
Surrounded by sorrows

I scuttle and search
Where to go I don’t know
I respire deep and perch
Staring the light’s glow

Wilds, full of misery
How I wish there’s a glee
Never assumed I’m free
Hence, I wanted to flee

There’s no valor inside
To leave in this cold heart
What time would I abide
For a new life to start :)

Jul 05, 2008 06:28 pm

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Wilds, full of misery
How I wish there’s a glee
Never assumed I’m free
Hence, I wanted to flee

i like this part... fantastic.
you're the man! ^_^

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Jul 05, 2008 07:07 pm

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Life still gives us choices, despite our seemingly hopeless, meaningless, solitary existence. Let us choose to hope and believe that happiness can be had amid sorrow.

Beautiful words. Beautiful piece.

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Ikaw. Ako. Tayo lang. Lagi.