Have you ever hurt someone you love so much like it wasn't you?
...and then end up hurting yourself more?

A wound that you cut, which is so deep
That you don't even know if you will be able to heal?
A wound that you never thought was there,
and then one day you realize that it was cut deeper and deeper
and that there is no more cure for it?

I have.
And it kills me...

I thought we will be together.
I thought we will last forever.
But it's all over now,
And all I have are just memories of how we were.

I have loved you with all my heart
And I'd be lying if I didn't admit that I love you still.
You see, this feeling won't fade away that easily.

I have prayed hundreds of times,
Cried thousands of tears,
Begged and put down my pride,
Hoping that tomorrow you'd be back.

I still dream of the day when I would see you again
And hope that you will understand
That when I say this, it comes from my heart.
"I'm sorry baby..."

My tears rolling down my cheeks as I write this
My heart's throb, slowly dying.
Feeling every pain as I go back
And face the truth of what happened.

Yes, maybe I'm delusional.
I may be weak.
I might be foolish.
And maybe I'm not perfect for you,
But there is one thing that I know and I am sure of...

I love you.
I miss you.
And I'm sorry for hurting you...

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I'm no poet and I don't know much about making one.
All I want is to express how I'm feeling.
Please feel free to comment also on the structure.
Thanks...

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.COM:Zhutios[14:54] El Dorado (Sulfur); .PH:Nusiios [77:44] Queber

i'm sorry you feel sorry.

you're on the right track. expressing yourself in different ways will help ease the hurt...and unburden you of guilt and worries (i hope).

take care cass...

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casSidiE said:

I'm no poet and I don't know much about making one.
All I want is to express how I'm feeling.
Please feel free to comment also on the structure.
Thanks...

believe me cass......may talent ka..narrative poem yata tawag dito kung hindi me nagkakamali......keep it up....nice work.....

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(.com [67:55},[67:56],[66:56],[66:55] TDP kakeru)([49:35].ph)

Nakakarelate ako... and i'm having this kind of problem right now.. pati minsan sa work affected ako..

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ATE CARPE, I guess this is really one good way of letting all the pain I feel inside out.. i also hope that this would help. Thank you ate. You take care always too.

KAKERU, thanks. Do I really?

TAZ, yup... nakaka-affect ka nga din sa performance ko sa office. Hindi naman kasi madaling i-conceal yung totoong nararamdaman natin eh... lalo pa when we feel so broken. How I wish there's someone who could just simply mend our hearts and our broken souls...

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.COM:Zhutios[14:54] El Dorado (Sulfur); .PH:Nusiios [77:44] Queber

haizz..pag ibig nga naman..

cge ilabas mo lang yan...sabay itagay natin

anyway nice piece...full of emotions...si bebe ba yan?

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Love all,trust a few,Do wrong to none..

AJ, sinabi mo pa... pag-ibig. sigh

Pumunta ka na kasi dito sa hajj para maitagay natin yan. lol.

Kidding aside, thanks. Full of emotion ba? Yan kasi talaga nararamdaman ko eh. Si bebe? Bulong ko sayo. lol.

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.COM:Zhutios[14:54] El Dorado (Sulfur); .PH:Nusiios [77:44] Queber

mukhang malungkot yan mama cass ah.

sapul na sapul sa kaibuturan ng puso.

i'll pray nalang to give you strength at will para maayos yan

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games from millionaires

Like a message in a bottle, I hope the waves of understanding and forgiveness help your sincerest sentiments flow to his direction.

Everybody makes mistakes but I still believe that true love forgives and accepts. I hope the person behind your piece finds it in his heart to unburden your grief.

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Ikaw. Ako. Tayo lang. Lagi.

ANAKIZ, thanks ha...

ATE CHOCO, thanks for helping me with the title.

I really hope that this will reach him. I am still hopeful. Though, I feel that he has already closed his doors for me.

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.COM:Zhutios[14:54] El Dorado (Sulfur); .PH:Nusiios [77:44] Queber

@cass
totoo yun...ang galing mo talaga...katunayan nga dumugo ilong ko...lolz

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bluryan_kakeru said:
@cass
totoo yun...ang galing mo talaga...katunayan nga dumugo ilong ko...lolz

Natawa naman daw ako...

Seriously, I was crying so hard last night while watching nip tuck. Sheesh. Talk about being so dramatic. But really, even if I try my best to be busy with other stuff, thoughts of him still haunt me.. And that's when I decided to write about how I was feeling.

I'm better though in composing songs. LOL. Wanted to make one but I have no more guitar.

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.COM:Zhutios[14:54] El Dorado (Sulfur); .PH:Nusiios [77:44] Queber

naramdaman ko yung poem R2 and yes they're right, full of emotions.

you really don't need to be a poet to come up with such lines. minsan you just have to let go of the feelings either by telling it to someone or by writing it. and this is a good outlet. im sure somehow you feel better dahil dito sa poem mo di ba?

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Sis R1

True sis, full of emotions yan. You know what I'm really going through... And I'm thankful to have you by my side. Saying this out loud has really helped me. I have been keeping how I felt for a very long time and now I want it out in the open. Sometimes it helps if someone could just listen (in this case, read) to what I have to say... to what I feel.

Again sis, thank you. I am blessed to have you as my very good friend.

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.COM:Zhutios[14:54] El Dorado (Sulfur); .PH:Nusiios [77:44] Queber

manang cass ang masasabi ko lang eh "aynakuh hmp"

baka mamya may lumaki ang ulo dito

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